these texts are an archive of my life in the San Francisco Bay Area from march 2007 - march 2015. it stands as a record of close to a decade of my life, charting the struggles i faced as an artist, daughter, and lover. messy and chaotic at times, eloquent and poetic at others, these texts are an index i am proud of. it was here in this electric box that i learned how to be honest about my experiences and the person i needed to become. it was here that i first learned the truism that words make the world and how to trust such a beautiful, rife, hard fact.
Aug 27, 2009
work, work, work...
yesterday afternoon i started going through the poems again - the rejected ones - and did quite a bit of long, hard work on several of them. slowly, slowly, slowly, these pieces are finding the right voice and time and cadence and all those things that make a poem a poem, i suppose. it's so much harder than painting. a landslide harder. it's real easy to write a bad poem... a good poem is a rare and miraculous occurrence. there is definitely no formula for it and no map to guide you. none whatsoever. it must be the sheer love of words that keeps a person coming back to struggle and fight and lose and struggle some more.
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Go you, keep at it!
You have probably read this poem before, but anytime I think about how much I love words, I think about Robert Hass's "Meditation at Lagunitas"--
http://www.diabeacon.org/prg/poetry/87_88/hass1.html
-"the other notion that,
because there is in this world no one thing
to which the bramble of blackberry corresponds,
a word is elegy to what it signifies."
i had NOT read that poem before! thank you!!!! thank you dearly and so so so very much! i've read it three times now and i'll read it at least once more before i go to bed. beautiful!
i will keep at it. they force my had at times. the poems. even if they're bad, they show themselves. they refuse to be ignored. :)
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